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The pinkish red color for the beads looks good, very excellently done! Nice shadows.
I still have some qualms with her shoulder, but too little too late I guess.
I think her mouth makes her look a little weird, kind of confused. Maybe have her mouth just barely open. It's sort of a triangle shape right now, maybe make it more of an oval shape, if that makes any sense. Leave the corners of her mouth as they are now.
Also, the pink beads don't quite fit with the rest of the colors. Maybe make them a little darker to match her undie swimsuit better.
And I don't really want to make the beads dark colored, since they're supposed to be transparent, and very "girly" if you must... but I think I'll change the beads different colors until they look better.