Commission: piggieslie4x

I can tell that mask gave you a lot of trouble. It's kind of skewed the whole face. And where the face looks like it's kind of turning at a downward angle, the hair looks like it's facing the viewer straight on.
Your pictures are all pretty consistent, which is good, but it can end up bad if they stay the same and don't get any better. I'd say try to take a little longer with every picture you do. When you think it's finished, take a day or so off from it and then look at it again and see if you still feel that way.